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Elissa Dines's avatar

Wow. This is excellent! Damn creepy but excellent! Next instalment please!!

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Javier Mixco's avatar

Thank you!! I loved writing this one

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Oh my gosh! This is just sensational! Excellent writing, brilliant mind. Just loved this. ❤️

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Javier Mixco's avatar

That is so nice of you to say! Thanks for reading!!

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Jake Varrone's avatar

Immersive world building, and compelling story. Very well done, Javier!

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Javier Mixco's avatar

Thanks Jake!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Amazing work, Javier! I loved the rich detail and the immersive worldbuilding throughout. The mystery and intrigue were exceptional as well. A fantastic use of the prompt, my friend!

I'll make a note to mention this piece on next week's podcast as well, not to worry!

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Javier Mixco's avatar

Thank you! I enjoyed the prompt I hope to participate regularly! I really like the challenge of getting all three parts of the prompt into the story

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Sounds amazing! I’d love to see what you do with future prompts as well. I’m a big fan of your writing voice and style.

When I first joined Substack earlier this year, things took off when I hosted Flash Fiction February, and then in May I did a horror challenge called “Madness and (May)hem.”

These Power up Prompts are a way to keep things moving while I plan out a new 30-day challenge, so be sure to keep an eye out for an announcement soon regarding something in October. 😁

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Javier Mixco's avatar

Sounds fun!

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Leo thee Lemon's avatar

That was awesome

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Javier Mixco's avatar

Thank you!

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