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Mr. Prickly™'s avatar

Javier, this is such a thoughtful weaving of history and imagination. You gave Shorty Keough a moment of warmth and humanity on that train, which makes his real sacrifice hit even harder. A beautiful way to honor courage through story.

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Dblkrose of BSP's avatar

Javier, this piece hums with quiet humanity. What struck me wasn’t the combat but the letter Vernon carries like a second heart, unopened, too sacred to risk changing.

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